Discussion in 'Scenic, Architecture, and Travel' started by caimi, Jun 13, 2013.
Oly EM5 pan14mm
I'd like to see the second one in color.
zoar u.c.c. (color)
Here you go, Juan.
Caimi -From my aesthetics the second is not a stable or cohesive composition. The visual weight of the 2 broad parallel bands across its center overwhelm the structure and its reflection. Even if you could shoot from another vantage point to remove the grass' reflection the separation is too great. Also from my perspective the difference in values between top and bottom makes it visually bottom heavy.
Below: The middle of original composition has been removed not as a suggestion for a compositional change to the image, but a value comparison between top and bottom.
<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/95688968@N02/9063112821/" title="Caimi valued demo by FotoCrit, on Flickr">"1024" height="588" alt="Caimi valued demo"></a>
In retrospect: It appears that you have altered the values between top and bottom in the B+W version.
I did, Chrome. And I agree that the color version is not as effective.
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