Tree & Sky

Discussion in 'Black and White' started by Eternal Newbie, May 14, 2012.

  1. Eternal Newbie

    Eternal Newbie Mu-43 Regular

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    Nov 2, 2011
    Wakefield, UK
    Paul Hardy
    Hello

    This was taken on Sunday at Brimham Rocks in North Yorkshire, UK

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    I thought it would suit monochrome (even this slightly melodramatic treatment).
    Now I think I should have cropped the bottom and RHS to lose the small bush. Would be grateful to hear people's views on that

    Thanks
    Paul
     
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  2. peterbee

    peterbee Mu-43 Top Veteran

    785
    Nov 2, 2011
    Huddersfield, UK
    Peter Bartlett
    Thanks for sharing the image with us. I agree that the small bush is distracting - rather than crop, I'd consider cloning it out, with a bit of care it should be do-able. I'd also boost the contrast a bit to give the image more impact.

    Nice to meet someone on here from my part of the world.:clap2:
     
  3. fin azvandi

    fin azvandi Mu-43 All-Pro

    Mar 12, 2011
    South Bend, IN
    I would not want to lose too much of the rocks below the tree - doesn't help with this image but I wonder if you could have changed your angle slightly so the lower bush wasn't in the frame but you still had a good line on the rocks/tree/sky?
     
  4. Eternal Newbie

    Eternal Newbie Mu-43 Regular

    39
    Nov 2, 2011
    Wakefield, UK
    Paul Hardy
    Thanks for your comments.

    I honestly thought I'd almost overdone the contrast so your comment is very interesting -- looking again at the levels I see there is still some way I can safely go.

    I agree about the angle. It was a bit of a grab shot, and if I had taken a couple of paces to my right I could have moved the smaller bush out of frame.

    Will know better next time...!
     
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