Glenn, I do think this one is much better! Although you're losing some details in the foreground I think that's OK because now the buildings and all that's behind the two friends talking stand out much better. It's an incredible sight - and what an amazing garden that must be! I don't think I'd want to look over the edge, however.
I hope some others will give their feedback. If you wanted to we could move this into Image Works where helpful critiquing is more the norm and encouraged. I'm sure those who are much more post processing software savvy than I would have suggestions - if you wanted them. Let me know, I can easily move the thread for you.
Meanwhile - this is one stunning scene you've managed to photograph quite well I think. I bet it could be a great print, too.
P.S. Must have been a fantastic trip/visit!