See-saw

Bullfrog

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Took this with the silhouette setting in the GF1 with the 20mm. I was aiming to bring out the metal loops of the see-saw and make an interesting composition.If I recall correctly it was f 1.7 / 1/30


Please critique!! (and don't worry about being too harsh - I want to improve)
 

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cosinaphile

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interesting shot if a bit dark , try using a lightening tool in a photo program for the foreground and feather it into the dark background a bit that red would kick things up a notch if it was lighter and saturated

im not an expert myself but thats what i would try
 

BillN

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Morning Paul

not sure about that one - but I'm no expert

Agree that it is a bit dark and maybe cropped too much - i.e. I'd like to see a little more of the background
 

Brian Mosley

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I like it, somehow reminds me of a horse from a distance.

Not a lot I can think to suggest for improvement - if you like it then you've been successful imho.

Cheers

Brian
 

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