Post Processing Challenge #233: The San Francisco Bay Bridge

MarkRyan

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I took this photo of the San Francisco Bay Bridge on a recent photo walk after work. Lots of challenges in post and I ended up giving up on it, but I still think there's potential.

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The challenges as I see them:

  • Perspective needs correction.
  • Mixed light sources so white balance is a challenge.
  • Long shutter, handheld, so there's some motion blur obscuring details.

But that's just my take. What's yours?

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Contest will close Friday, February 19 at 9:00 PM PT.

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The Challenger will provide any photo that he/she deems worthy of challenging other members to "improve" by way Post Processing. It must be their own photo. "Improve" is a subjective term, and includes many creative ideas as well as traditional "fixing". The Challenger agrees that entrants may make any changes they deem fit to post in their entry.

The winner of the previous challenge gets to post the next Challenge and serves as the judge for his/her PP challenge.

For obvious purposes, the judge is disqualified from participating in his/her own PP challenge. Instead, he/she should post a photo to start out the challenge.

If the winner fails to post a new challenge within five days, the responsibility passes to the runner-up.

At the end of the 72-hours (we don't have to be strict about 72-hours, especially with time differences depending on where you are on the globe), the judge will name a winner, a first runner-up, and a second runner-up.

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Entries shall be limited to 2 per member for each Challenge.

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not an easy one at all, not sure if I am happy with it yet, but here it is....

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another version, after the fog rolls in...

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Tried to pull out the pier in the middle. In the process of learning Lightroom, thanks for the exercise.

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It's over the top for sure. Initially going for a mute approach but decided to keep the purple cast. Done mostly in the new OV3, which is much more speedy, and touched up in LR4.
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I thought it looked better without the pier, so here's a quasi panoramic with a bunch of adjustments in Lightroom.

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This was a real challenge for me, to the extent that I dumped the mess I made first time and started over by deblurring in PSCC before editing the TIFF in LRCC to cut the blue and green flares, boosting the oranges slightly because I liked the look and various local lighting adjustments. Hope you like it!

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Original at Flickr.

But I'm not sure if I like the b/w version better:

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Original at Flickr
 

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Here's mine. I wanted to bring out the color.

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I think this is my first intentional vertical 16:9. I think we should see more of these now that smart phones are ubiquitous right?

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In ACR: Perspective correction, some pulling of highlights and pushing of shadows, gradient adjust bridge to be a bit brighter and more saturated, added split tone.
In PS: Content aware fill to extend sky and a tiny bit on the right edge to compensate for losses after perspective correction, crop to 16:9, add vignette.
 
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I thought the night sky needed some excitement

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As I scrolled this webpage, I liked the crop where the bridge is largely secondary to the structure underneath. This is a simple crop from my first image, might redo it yet
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Nice work folks, fun to see the different ways you can take a photo.

#3: vorlon1. I tended to prefer the B&W edits, maybe because I found the color in this photo so challenging. Fun fact: The bridge is gray, the red in the photo came from the odd mix of light sources and the camera white balancing to the lower half.


#2: Scotsman. Another nice B&W, and I like the crop.


#1: AussiePhil. I'll be honest, I actually don't like the water in this edit, but the streaking stars address what I think was subconsciously bothering me most about this photo -- the massive negative space in the upper-right corner and the visual imbalance. I would've never thought to do this sort of edit but I think it works.

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Thanks for playing.
 

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Yeah, you are right, of course. My post just didn't come across the right way. Despite MarkRyan putting Bay Bridge in the title, and my having seen the lighted bridge in person. My mind just couldn't overcome the auto association.
 

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Thanks Mark

Yeah the oil paint effect on the water is either loved or not and I'm sure it's cost me before but I try to push all my limits on the edits each time and selecting areas in photos still is a major challenge for me. I wasn't sure on it this time either.

The shooting stars came from layering a shooting star image with a sky nearly black under the bridge then selectively revealing the layer. The empty black space really bugged me and let me learn more so thank you.

I'll find an image as the day goes on today
 

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Passing the baton back to you (as runner-up) if you have a suitable photo, I couldn't find something yesterday and visitors in the afternoon kept me from going out to grab a photo.

Apologies to all for holding the flow of the challenges up.

Phil
 
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