Portrait edit with LR and four Variations ??

Discussion in 'Street, Documentary, and Portrait' started by PantelisMor, Sep 28, 2014.

  1. PantelisMor

    PantelisMor Mu-43 Veteran

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    Jan 14, 2013
    I capture this portrait. I edit with LR and i end up in four photos.

    I want to listen your opinion about them.

    Thx a lot.. PMoromalos_20140316_0333. PMoromalos_20140316_0330. PMoromalos_20140316_0331. PMoromalos_20140316_0332.
     
  2. fransglans

    fransglans Mu-43 Top Veteran

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    gus
    the desaturated second one fits best imo... nice capture!
     
  3. mpresley

    mpresley Mu-43 Regular

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    Sep 13, 2012
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    Michael
    I agree, the toned ones doesn't work for me but the second one I like, seems to fit the subject well.
     
  4. titi_8881

    titi_8881 Mu-43 Regular

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    Tijana
    The second one is my favorite as well !
     
  5. Replytoken

    Replytoken Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    May 7, 2012
    Puget Sound
    Ken
    I prefer the first two.

    --Ken
     
  6. DHart

    DHart Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Jan 7, 2010
    Scottsdale, Arizona
    Don
    Another vote for the first two. Personally (and we all differ on such editing options) I would open the shadows somewhat, to bring in some texture and detail in what looks to be a rich and interesting background. Wonderful image.
     
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  7. m4/3boy

    m4/3boy Mu-43 Veteran

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    Jul 21, 2013
    Thumbs up for 1 & 2.
     
  8. Aushiker

    Aushiker Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Sep 12, 2014
    Fremantle, Western Australia
    Andrew
    Another vote for #2

    Andrew
     
  9. budeny

    budeny Mu-43 All-Pro

    Mar 4, 2014
    Boulder, CO
    #3, then #1
    Was he playing or standing still when shot was taken?
     
  10. Iconindustries

    Iconindustries Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Yep, I like the 2nd as well. I agree with Don on texture -definition slider. May eek that extra bit out of an already fantastic image.

    best,
    icon
     
  11. PantelisMor

    PantelisMor Mu-43 Veteran

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    Jan 14, 2013
    He was playing..
     
  12. PantelisMor

    PantelisMor Mu-43 Veteran

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    Jan 14, 2013
    I will try open the shadows, to see the difference, thx a lot..
     
  13. lightmonkey

    lightmonkey Mu-43 Veteran

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    Dec 22, 2013
    1. a bit too silvery-coppery... was there slight tint added in cross-processing or half-toning? id like it more gray
    2. would prefer a touch more clarity and less shadow boost - tone mapping on the hands look a bit off (not enough gradation/shadows)
    3. like the heavy handed color treatment but would denoise, pull back highlights on face, and darken blacks a bit
    4. too heavy handed with low end lift

    preference order: 2>3/1>4
     
  14. fluberman

    fluberman Mu-43 Top Veteran

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    Sep 19, 2012
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    Alex
    #2 and then #1