Old Pier

Discussion in 'Black and White' started by Joltinjess, Feb 10, 2013.

  1. Joltinjess

    Joltinjess Mu-43 Regular

    Jan 6, 2013
    Port Moody, BC
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    I couldn't use a tripod for this shot so it's not as crisp as I would like. Any CC appreciated. [​IMG]
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  2. pdk42

    pdk42 One of the "Eh?" team

    Jan 11, 2013
    Leamington Spa, UK
    Nice composition. Could do with some lightening IMHO. Since you have 'Image ecditing OK', I had a tweak. What do you think?

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  3. David A

    David A Mu-43 All-Pro

    Sep 30, 2011
    Brisbane, Australia
    I prefer the darker, moodier feel of the original rather than the starker presentation of the edited version which I think goes too far. I think Paul is right about the image being able to benefit from some lightening, but I think it needs only a little, concentrated more in the darker tones, with the highlights touched as little as possible to retain the mood.

    I did a quick curves adjustment to the darker tones only in LR to get the following result:

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  4. 67DGS

    67DGS Mu-43 Regular

    Oct 5, 2012
    Vancouver, Canada
    I also think that it would be better with just a bit of lightening. I think that you did very well on this pic, I have taken quite a number of pics of this same pier and none came out as good as yours.

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  5. RevBob

    RevBob Super Moderator

    Jun 4, 2011
    NorthWestern PA
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    Perhaps a bit of lightening, but not too much. Interesting shot. :cool:
  6. Papadoc

    Papadoc Mu-43 Regular

    Jul 12, 2012
    Perhaps graduating the lightening from the periphery to the central portion. Great pic.