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Discussion in 'Black and White' started by Apsyms, Dec 16, 2012.

  1. Apsyms

    Apsyms Mu-43 Rookie

    18
    Dec 14, 2012
    New York
    Andrew
    street_shoes_by_ssgtsyms-d5o9b1i.png

    Thoughts?
     
  2. savvy

    savvy Mu-43 Top Veteran

    714
    Sep 28, 2012
    SE Essex, UK
    Les
    Nice composition and B&W treatment :thumbup:
     
  3. RevBob

    RevBob Super Moderator

    Jun 4, 2011
    NorthWestern PA
    Bob
    +1. :thumbup:
     
  4. Crdome

    Crdome Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Sep 11, 2011
    West Central Indiana
    Chrome
    Andrew -B+W is a good presentation.

    Responding to your request of suggestions: IMO the shoe is floating above the background without a relationship to it. Try cropping off the bottom portion of the composition above the wide dark area below the heel. This grounds (no pun) the shoe to the composition making it truly the subject of the composition.

    Two suggestions:
    - Allow editing and reposting of your images. This will help to make your experience here an educational one, by allowing others to provide visual suggestions about your images.

    -I keep the vertical height of posted images to 750 pixels. At 900+ pixels your complete image cannot be viewed on a single screen.

    Keep on shooting. -Chrome

    PS: message me if you would like me to post my crop of your image.
     
  5. Apsyms

    Apsyms Mu-43 Rookie

    18
    Dec 14, 2012
    New York
    Andrew
    Changed permissions to allow for editing; let's see what 'ya got
     
  6. Crdome

    Crdome Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Sep 11, 2011
    West Central Indiana
    Chrome
    Here is the basic idea. What do you think?

    RevBobstreet_shoes.jpg
     
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  7. Apsyms

    Apsyms Mu-43 Rookie

    18
    Dec 14, 2012
    New York
    Andrew
    I'm liking it a lot!
     
  8. Crdome

    Crdome Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Sep 11, 2011
    West Central Indiana
    Chrome
    Compose your images giving prominence to the subject. Good shooting. -Chrome