Discussion in 'Black and White' started by Apsyms, Dec 16, 2012.
Nice composition and B&W treatment
Andrew -B+W is a good presentation.
Responding to your request of suggestions: IMO the shoe is floating above the background without a relationship to it. Try cropping off the bottom portion of the composition above the wide dark area below the heel. This grounds (no pun) the shoe to the composition making it truly the subject of the composition.
- Allow editing and reposting of your images. This will help to make your experience here an educational one, by allowing others to provide visual suggestions about your images.
-I keep the vertical height of posted images to 750 pixels. At 900+ pixels your complete image cannot be viewed on a single screen.
Keep on shooting. -Chrome
PS: message me if you would like me to post my crop of your image.
Changed permissions to allow for editing; let's see what 'ya got
Here is the basic idea. What do you think?
I'm liking it a lot!
Compose your images giving prominence to the subject. Good shooting. -Chrome
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