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my daughter and friends (E-M5)

Discussion in 'Street, Documentary, and Portrait' started by twalker294, Oct 9, 2012.

  1. twalker294

    twalker294 Mu-43 Top Veteran

    543
    Aug 18, 2010
    Took some pics this morning of my daughter (in the middle,) and two of her friends for a yearbook ad:

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    Olympus E-M5, 45/1.8, processing in LR3

    The full set is here if you are interested...
     
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  2. Bhupinder2002

    Bhupinder2002 Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Fantastic colorful pic . OMD and Oly 1.8 are made for each other .
    Cheers
    Bhupinder
     
  3. soulofoto

    soulofoto Mu-43 Regular

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    Mar 21, 2012
    is the vignetting in the upper corners intentional? Is it from the lens or LR? Nice pic...
     
  4. twalker294

    twalker294 Mu-43 Top Veteran

    543
    Aug 18, 2010
    It's from LR. There is no vignetting to speak of with the 45.
     
  5. WT21

    WT21 Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Feb 19, 2010
    Boston
    Very fashionable young ladies!!!

    The highlights feel a little bright to me. Maybe pull them back a bit??
     
  6. twalker294

    twalker294 Mu-43 Top Veteran

    543
    Aug 18, 2010
    Yeah I probably will before the final version. I noticed that when I processed them -- thanks for the feedback!
     
  7. Hyubie

    Hyubie Unique like everyone else

    Oct 15, 2010
    Massachusetts
    Herbert
    Youth here is nicely captured. :smile:

    However, I also noticed the highlights and is it a little skewed? Or maybe the girl on the right adds to the perceived skewness of the photo by leaning into the direction of the skew? (Hope that was clear :biggrin:)
     
  8. rhoydotp

    rhoydotp Mu-43 Top Veteran

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    Aug 5, 2012
    Toronto, Ont
    rpamparo
    the first thing i noticed. i think it's skewed just by looking at the lines on the red garage door. but it could just be perception
     
  9. WT21

    WT21 Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Feb 19, 2010
    Boston
    The door frame on the left looks pretty plumb, so I think the doorframe on the right is either crooked itself and/or some perspective distortion (i.e. the camera is not a true 90 degrees to the door)
     
  10. mattia

    mattia Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    May 3, 2012
    The Netherlands
    runs a little hot for my taste - you've blown the red channel quite significantly as well as several areas on the girls' faces and clothing. Pulling back on exposure by even 0.10 stops will fix that. Could also do with a little more sharpening.
     
  11. twalker294

    twalker294 Mu-43 Top Veteran

    543
    Aug 18, 2010
    It looks like the perception of crookedness is due to perspective. I straightened based on a horizontal line on the door and it made them look like they were going uphill ;-)

    As for the red channel being blown, the histogram looks pretty clean to me:

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    The red channel is definitely strong ;-) but it doesn't appear to be blown. I have upped the saturation quite a bit because the final product will be in a yearbook, which tends to undersaturate.

    Thanks for the comments and keep 'em coming!