lonely life...

Discussion in 'Black and White' started by PantelisMor, Jun 10, 2013.

  1. PantelisMor

    PantelisMor Mu-43 Veteran

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    Jan 14, 2013
  2. RevBob

    RevBob Super Moderator Subscribing Member

    Jun 4, 2011
    NorthWestern PA
    Bob
    I love the composition, but it seems a little dark overall.
     
  3. Iansky

    Iansky Mu-43 All-Pro

    Dec 26, 2009
    The Cotswolds, UK
    I agree with Bob, nice leading line & composition but too dark (suspect you did this to get detail in the sky rather than washed out area?).
     
  4. PantelisMor

    PantelisMor Mu-43 Veteran

    309
    Jan 14, 2013
    I think both of you are right. It's dark.. The truth is that i emphasized more on the sky.. Thx a lot for your comments. They help me me to get better.... And sorry for my english....
     
  5. DeeJayK

    DeeJayK Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Feb 8, 2011
    Pacific Northwest, USA
    Keith
    I agree with both Ian and Bob that the image is a bit dark, but the composition is really nice. If you've got Lightroom, adding a graduated ND to the sky would be dead simple and would allow you to pull up the foreground a bit.

    The strong diagonal lines leading to your subject (including the lines formed by the clouds in the upper right) are fantastic. Unfortunately the focal plane is a little too deep into the image instead of right on the seated figure.

    Great "eye", though.
     
  6. PantelisMor

    PantelisMor Mu-43 Veteran

    309
    Jan 14, 2013
    I will search for this filter... And i will post my new photo.. If i have problem i will be back.

    Thx a lot....
     
  7. GaryAyala

    GaryAyala Mu-43 Legend

    Jan 2, 2011
    SoCal
    I echo all those above ... I am waiting for the new image.

    Gary
     
  8. twokatmew

    twokatmew Mu-43 All-Pro Subscribing Member

    Jun 1, 2012
    Lansing, MI, US
    Margaret
    +1 :biggrin:

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