jetty + river

Discussion in 'Scenic, Architecture, and Travel' started by nickthetasmaniac, May 11, 2012.

  1. nickthetasmaniac

    nickthetasmaniac Mu-43 All-Pro

    Jan 11, 2011
    GH2 + Lumix 7-14/f4

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    60" @ f7.1 and 200iso
     
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  2. veereshai

    veereshai Mu-43 Top Veteran

    777
    May 12, 2011
    Arlington, VA
    Very nice tones Nick and the composition is quite good as well. The only distraction for me in the frame was the lower right corner. My mind is split between two entry points into the frame :smile:. And because the rock is lighter, the focus shifts to it instantaneously. A crop might help.
     
  3. nickthetasmaniac

    nickthetasmaniac Mu-43 All-Pro

    Jan 11, 2011
    Me too, it's giving me the irates...

    MkII:

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    I'm not entirely happy with this either tho, as I think the sky begins to overpower the image...
     
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  4. Livnius

    Livnius Super Moderator

    Jul 7, 2011
    Melbourne. Australia
    Joe
    Nice shot....and I think the altered version works better too.
     
  5. veereshai

    veereshai Mu-43 Top Veteran

    777
    May 12, 2011
    Arlington, VA
    Second one looks better to me.
     
  6. nickthetasmaniac

    nickthetasmaniac Mu-43 All-Pro

    Jan 11, 2011
    Thanks :smile: (and thanks for the constructive criticism!)