How do you like my portrait photography teaser video? :)

kevinparis

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nice work.... just the right length for the message

however my big criticism is the rather harsh sudden appearance of the word YOU - the change in typeface and even its position really jars - its like you are suddenly shouting

I would have used the same typeface that you have used earlier, and have it dissolve into the centre of the screen before then going to your logo/contact details

cheers

K
 
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