Discussion in 'Open Discussion' started by marcotronic, Jun 21, 2014.
deleted my post and the video on youtube.
nice work.... just the right length for the message
however my big criticism is the rather harsh sudden appearance of the word YOU - the change in typeface and even its position really jars - its like you are suddenly shouting
I would have used the same typeface that you have used earlier, and have it dissolve into the centre of the screen before then going to your logo/contact details
Separate names with a comma.