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GH2 Narrative Short for Project Twenty 1 contest

Discussion in 'Video to Share' started by Psynema, Oct 1, 2012.

  1. Psynema

    Psynema Mu-43 Regular

    82
    May 14, 2011
    Philadelphia
    Gary Hanna
    RED+WHITE - YouTube

    Here's the submitted version of a short I did with a few friends for Project Twenty 1, which is a contest where you have to make a short film from scratch in 21 days (like the 48 hr fest but 3 weeks). Any thoughts or critiques? I'd like to revamp this. I for sure will be re CC/grading it. Nominated for best cinematography and directing.

    Thanks

    GH2, flowmotion, 7-14mm, 35mm rok, 85mm rok, 135mm Canon FD but sparingly.
     
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  2. jpcairns

    jpcairns Mu-43 Regular

    63
    Jul 21, 2012
    Vancouver, BC
    Joshua
    That looks great, I enjoyed it!
     
  3. 0dBm

    0dBm Mu-43 Top Veteran

    859
    Jun 30, 2011
    Western United States
    Very creative. Thank you for sharing.
     
  4. Crdome

    Crdome Mu-43 Hall of Famer Subscribing Member

    Sep 11, 2011
    West Central Indiana
    Chrome
    Nicely done!
     
  5. speedandstyle

    speedandstyle Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Not bad!

    Actually it is pretty good and I am a fellow film maker so I have seen my share of BAD. The story is pretty good, the acting is well above average and the camera work is very good. The one thing I noticed is that the foley audio track is sometimes louder than the dialog and that needs to be fixed. The only other thing I saw was that the samurai swords were upside down - they should face up , that is edge up.
     
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