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Discussion in 'Scenic, Architecture, and Travel' started by HazyOmega, May 3, 2014.

  1. HazyOmega

    HazyOmega Mu-43 Rookie

    22
    Aug 25, 2013
    Montreal, Canada
    Hello,
    I just started photography and those were taken during a recent trip. I would like comments about these photos.
    E-PL5 with Sigma 19mm f2.8


    14117221163_29634a20ee_b. 20140323_0013-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
    Architecture at Charle de Gauge Airport
    Edited in LR



    14097134785_5912e66ac2_b. 20140323_0072-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
    Small door in "Vieille Bourse" alley
    Edited in LR



    13910513227_bb97da047f_b. 20140323_0111 by HazyOmega, on Flickr
    Old Brick building in Lille street
    OOC Jpeg



    13910540140_0aa95ae3ed_b. 20140323_0133-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
    Bell tower beside Lille cathedral
    Edited in LR



    13910505469_957266ea77_b. 20140323_0136-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
    Old Jaguar in Lille street
    Edited in LR



    Thanks!
     
  2. 50orsohours

    50orsohours Mu-43 All-Pro

    Oct 13, 2013
    Portland Oregon
    I love the Jaguar picture. Very well done. I also like the first 2, the first picture should be defringed however. The bell tower and the old building shots look like snap shots. A different composition would have worked better in my opinion. The power line and the tree are distracting . Otherwise good.
     
  3. CiaranCReilly

    CiaranCReilly Mu-43 Veteran

    481
    Oct 18, 2012
    Dublin
    Ciaran Reilly
    Really like 1, 2 and 5 because of the compositon. CdeG airport is extremely cool. Some odd fringing at the top right of 1 as the previous poster said. Nice set though!
     
  4. HazyOmega

    HazyOmega Mu-43 Rookie

    22
    Aug 25, 2013
    Montreal, Canada
    Thanks for the feedback. I just found out that LR has a color fringing correction tool. Easier and faster than using manual spot correction.

    I think you are right about 3 & 4 ... it looks more like snapshot.

    Here's a couple more pictures that I took and processed today :

    13931728358_a8a832fe15_b. 20140323_0124-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr


    14138408923_da3dc4d2d8_b. 20140323_0062-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr


    13931728068_1356f9ea1f_b. 20140323_0114-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr


    Thanks!
     
  5. Crdome

    Crdome Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Sep 11, 2011
    West Central Indiana
    Chrome
    Haze -Welcome, You have a good eye for composition. I look forward to following your growth.

    -Chrome
     
  6. AdamSF

    AdamSF Shutterbugger

    Oct 13, 2013
    San Francisco, CA
    Adam
    I like the composition of the airport shot. I would crop it a bit on the left to make things a little less "busy".