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HazyOmega

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Hello,
I just started photography and those were taken during a recent trip. I would like comments about these photos.
E-PL5 with Sigma 19mm f2.8


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20140323_0013-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
Architecture at Charle de Gauge Airport
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20140323_0072-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
Small door in "Vieille Bourse" alley
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20140323_0111 by HazyOmega, on Flickr
Old Brick building in Lille street
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20140323_0133-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
Bell tower beside Lille cathedral
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20140323_0136-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr
Old Jaguar in Lille street
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50orsohours

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I love the Jaguar picture. Very well done. I also like the first 2, the first picture should be defringed however. The bell tower and the old building shots look like snap shots. A different composition would have worked better in my opinion. The power line and the tree are distracting . Otherwise good.
 

CiaranCReilly

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Really like 1, 2 and 5 because of the compositon. CdeG airport is extremely cool. Some odd fringing at the top right of 1 as the previous poster said. Nice set though!
 

HazyOmega

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Thanks for the feedback. I just found out that LR has a color fringing correction tool. Easier and faster than using manual spot correction.

I think you are right about 3 & 4 ... it looks more like snapshot.

Here's a couple more pictures that I took and processed today :

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20140323_0124-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr


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20140323_0062-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr


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20140323_0114-T by HazyOmega, on Flickr


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AdamSF

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I like the composition of the airport shot. I would crop it a bit on the left to make things a little less "busy".
 

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