Call for critics: "Hands - a serial"

Discussion in 'Other Genres' started by PMCC, Jul 5, 2013.

  1. PMCC

    PMCC Mu-43 Regular

    Feb 18, 2013
    Another photography experiment



  2. DanSullivan

    DanSullivan Mu-43 Regular

    Jun 21, 2010
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    Dan Sullivan
    Interesting idea!

    1. Like the grazing light but not the out-of-focus. The same shot in focus would be cool.
    2. Best one IMO. would be better if all the fingers has similar whitespace between them, i.e., if middle finger was to the right a bit.
    3. distracting on the lower left. Maybe try a tighter crop on just the TV.
  3. DeeJayK

    DeeJayK Mu-43 Hall of Famer

    Feb 8, 2011
    Pacific Northwest, USA
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    Interesting theme, but none of these particular shots really grabs me (pun semi-intended).

    The framing on the first shot seems a bit too tight, and as has been pointed out it suffers from focus/camera shake issues.

    I assume the third shot is a double-exposure. I like that idea, but the shot of the TV is not ideal. If you're trying to make some statement about television or media, it's lost on me here.

    I'd like to see you keep working this theme.