3rd Model Shoot: Cate

Newnan3

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Ok here is the 3rd shoot I did. I shot all of these using a beauty dish i had just gotten as the main light. I felt like i didnt raise it high enough.

C&C encouraged:thumbup:

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4)This one took 4 tries......
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cosinaphile

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1 st shot , her leg it covered by the edge of a bench , this hurts the photo

2nds shot lighting lighting and location harsh shadows and less than inspires seating
dont push this enough , you are on the right track , look at really sucessful magazine work to emulate , in so far as that is possible , it aint cheap or easy , this i know

3rd shot pretty good but perhaps crop a little , wasted space behind , if for the shadow than do for that thru a crop too also consider dodging ther black dress in the hightlight range for more presence of the dress

4 uneven lighting tweak and vary try a bit of bounce to lighten thes light sucking areas

7 the best for me , could be improved a bit thru burn and dodge , but your enthusiasm
and hard work is is something that is commendable and shows how serious to improve your skill set you are , keep it up , i see improvements here and there wholly due to your commitment to improve .


you have a knack for finding attractive models , could you offer advice in return on how you do that so well?, cheers
 

Enrique

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Good work Cosina¡¡¡. I love the second and the fourth . She looks pretty natural in them.:smile:
 

Streetshooter

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The 3rd is really good in concept and execution.... the shadow of her is wonderful and the contrasting branches and shadows lend to the eye travel......
I think Kelly is your best model so far..... you seem to have a rapport with her...
 

JoepLX3

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2+7 - Indeed best series, in these 2 shots she look at you in nice relaxed why and light is not disturbing to me.
 
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